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Update paid-time-off index.html.md for grammar, vocab, clarity, links, etc.

Marcel Amirault requested to merge (removed):copyedit-paid-time-off into master

@toon and @nick.thomas I noticed your update to this page and felt I could flex my English Teacher muscles a little bit and help touch up the English. Could you review lines 59 to 112 to make sure you approve of the changes?

  • Burnout section reviewed by Toon or Nick

@aherrmann I figured, since I'm already reviewing the update, I might as well review the rest of the page. Could you check everything before line 59 and after line 112? I think the only significant change is in lines 118 to 126, because must take didn't seem to make sense, and are entitled to is more logical. (the rest is mostly standard grammar/clarity copy edits) I'll tag @chloe in case someone in People Ops should review too (especially lines 118-126). A second minor point would be regarding the amount of long lines. Should I cut everything down to 80'ish characters per line?

  • Everything else reviewed by Ashton or someone from People Ops.
Edited by Toon Claes

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